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a new?
Contributed by
skitzo-da-clown
on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 06:58:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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when my world was dark
and i had lost my heart
lost my soul, my will, and my way,
you came along side me
and you chose to confide in me
giving me the strength to face the day.
I wake in the light
turn to your side
and smile and shine like a star,
then i mourn a bit
cause the jist of it is
most people don't know who they are.
we shy away in privacy
and hope that our social legacy
will never be soiled or stained
we tell our selves that we are who we are
and inside we dull the pain.
But me on a hand
I understand
Because my place is here with you
and i turned over to you
and whispered i love you
and silently went back to bed.
So if your life is filled with darkness
and you find yourself heartless
Just do what went and did
Because all the joy in the world
is here with my girl
and i tell you now.....I love this kid.
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2008-03-06 18:58:44]
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Re: a new?
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by BornReckless on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 06:46:09 AM AEST
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| So in order to be happy we should all go and be with your girl? because thats what your last paragraph is saying. Sharing is caring. |
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Re: a new?
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by poeticeyez87 on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 08:04:41 AM AEST
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| nice poem just think you should rewrite the last part so you dont keep having "smart" comments like that |
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