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Heartbreak
Contributed by
smilez101
on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 04:06:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I asked him what was heartbreak
And he said not to worry
I will never hurt you.
But i should have seen him standing there
with a hammer in his hand
to shatter my heart
to pieces
just to many to count
and when i touched
What was left
of my heart the pain
went wrenching through my soul
be strong girl
hold back the tears
is what i say to myself
but he just kept on
as if to take my love
and walk all over it
and throw sorrys
at my doorstep
and i suddenly become
"the lady in blue"
saying how delicate my love is
what is heart break?
It's like that bad taste in your mouth
from all the ***** he fed you
and you constantly take it
Blinded !!
blinded by the whole ***** world
when is this ***** going to end...
the heart break I mean
When your ready to forgive
And just move on.
Mymind tells me
Copyright ©
smilez101
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2008-03-06 16:06:52]
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Re: Heartbreak
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 10:53:20 AM AEST
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Sadness and anger all rolled into one.........and you made it work
Good write
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Re: Heartbreak
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 03:32:32 PM AEST
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this is a very well expressed poem of getting hurt and becoming angry. this is very well written and expressed.
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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