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Blood Stains
Contributed by
exiled
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Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
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Blood Stains
The tears you never see are the ones that accompany my sleep.
As the sins of my past eat my humanity like a cancer.
As the hands of those whom held me up now try to tear me down.
The demon I comfort inside rears his head, so that I must hang mine.
The blood upon my hands is never washed clean.
Just hid under you, why is what I want what can never be.
My strength is my greatest weakness.
My mother my enemy, the one who carried me into this world and who pushed me to my grave.
The body draws breath and a blood stain.
Sign your work and be proud for your signature I wear from flesh that was cut and the muscle you tear.
Your nieve innocence is no camouflage to me.
I know what you did,
and what I had to do to make it right.
By: Gaylon Eskew
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exiled
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2003-03-11 11:00:00]
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Re: Blood Stains
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by M on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:24:47 AM AEST
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| Ahhh, this is such a sad poem. I can really relate, especially the opening line, i hope your friend knows what a good write this was/is, and i hope it helped him to get it all out. |
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 01:05:42 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is so good...i understand him...tell him what a great poem he has here...beautiful... |
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Re: Blood Stains
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by Gribba on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 02:50:02 PM AEST
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This is amazing!!! tell your friend that is is a truly great poem.
The feelings in it are so real, so true so strong... this poem speaks for it self!!! |
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Re: Blood Stains
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:45:23 PM AEST
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Oh wow... this is an amazing poem. The first and seconds stanzas are exactly how I feel! As soon as I read the first line, I knew I had to keep reading. It's just awesome!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Blood Stains
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by exiled on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:58:35 PM AEST
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| i am the one who wrote this ..my friend sam told me where to find it . i thank you for you postive feed back..the story behind this poem i that my mother left me and my brothes at a young age to find for orselfs i had to do very illegal acts whille growing up to take care of my younger bros..our mother still to this day refuses to admit she ever did anything wronge . so now i have to deal with a past that will always destroy my dreams of things to come...once again thank you ...Gaylon Eskew |
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Re: Blood Stains
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by SuicidalSon on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 07:56:29 AM AEST
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| tell your freind I thought it sucked |
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Re: Blood Stains
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by SuicidalSon on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 07:57:12 AM AEST
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| tell your freind I thought it sucked |
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