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Promises, Love, Trust, Respect, and Care

Contributed by Dragons_Of_Rose on Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 06:14:27 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Faded
Broken
Forgotten

Your promises to me

Bright
Intact
Completed

My promises to you

Lies
Doubts
Worthless

Your love for me

Truths
Certainty
Valuable

My love for you

Never
Faithless
Non believing

Your trust for me

Always
Faith
Believe

My trust for you

Disrespect
Thrown away
Doesn't matter

Your respect for me

Appreciate
Value
Matters

My respect for you

Left alone
Non helpful
Assure

Your caring for me

Attention
Aid
Worry

My caring for you

I should have seen it all before
But I was blinded by your love
I was the better half of this relationship
I was what you were unworthy of.

Now that I've made a list
And I can see all of what was
I'm glad we're no longer together
I've escaped the grasp of your claws.

Now I can move on to someone better
Someone who sees things the way I do
No longer will I feel that I'm the cause of all this
Because all along it was you.

Copyright © Dragons_Of_Rose ... [ 2002-07-30 06:14:27]
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Re: Promises, Love, Trust, Respect, and Care (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 04:22:32 AM AEST
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very strong words.
good write

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