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I Write Becasue Paper Listens

Contributed by allidoiswrite82 on Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 05:17:47 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract



I write because the paper listen

And I'm inspired when the stars glistens

Sometimes it seems I've been passed up because somethings missing

And I'm so far beyond irreconcilable differences

Seems like I've been given this mission

Praying and wishing

That one day I'll be the center of attention

The apple of the eye

The rose that grow from the concrete

That smooth relaxing path of street

That you just cant wait till it meets your feet

I want to be that thirst that moves you

The Saturday night beat that grooves you

That gentle hand that sooths you

It's not just about what I do to you

I want to be you

At three o'clock in the morning come see you

Give you my scriptures then bleed you

Show you, not just tell you that I need you

See I write because the paper listens

So when the words beat like a motor pistons

And you read these phases that I've given

You know I'm somewhere kissing

paper to pen

perhaps adding this in

Just to make it relate

I'm in a place where bliss cant go missin

White pages like forever fields

If nothing else this can't end

I've made lovers of these inanimate objects and made them speak like a true friend

And if you don't understand then there is no way you could be in the place that I'm in

I write because the paper listen

And it wont ridicule me for these thoughts in the distances

If enlightenment is a sentence Then life is what I been given

And I wouldn't pass on it either

Nor require my muse to award me a breather

I want to pass through the other side of the tunnel

And so I write leaving this paper trail

To get me back through

If not for me then you

Only after you learn that

I WRITE BECAUSE PAPER LISTENS




Copyright © allidoiswrite82 ... [ 2008-03-05 17:17:47]
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Re: I Write Becasue Paper Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 05:34:16 PM AEST
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You tried way too hard here to rhyme, and yet you still didn't do it very well. You also said very little in a lot of words; the poem did not need to be nearly that long.

By the way, grammar is your friend. Not that you need to follow it in all cases, but it generally makes you more articulate. You should look into that.


Re: I Write Becasue Paper Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 06:24:53 PM AEST
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I think it's a very unique, meaningfull write.
good work.
I write to frre my soul and we all have our unique voice. Doesn't do anyone any good to try-n-tell me how to write cause mine is raw, natural talent.
Keep writing.
huggs,
emy


Re: I Write Becasue Paper Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by allidoiswrite82 on Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 07:26:55 PM AEST
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I write because the paper listens

And I'm inspired when the stars glisten

Sometimes it seems I've been passed up because somethings missing

And I'm so far beyond irreconcilable differences

It Seems like I've been given this mission

Praying and wishing

That one day I'll be the center of attention

The apple of everyones eye

The rose that grow from the concrete

That smooth relaxing path of street

That you just cant wait until it meets your feet

I want to be that thirst that moves you

The Saturday night beat that grooves you

That gentle hand that sooths you

It's not just about what I do to you

I want to be you

At three o'clock in the morning come see you

Give you my scriptures then bleed you

Show you, not just tell you that I need you

See I write because the paper listens

So when the words beat like a motor pistons

And you read these phases that I've given

You know I'm somewhere kissing

paper to pen

perhaps adding this in

Just to make it relate

I'm in a place where bliss cant go missin

White pages like forever fields

If nothing else this can't end

I've made lovers of these inanimate objects and made them speak like a true friend

And if you don't understand then there is no way you could be in the place that I'm in

I write because the paper listen

And it wont ridicule me for these thoughts in the distances

If enlightenment is a sentence Then life is what I been given

And I wouldn't pass on it either

Nor require my muse to award me a breather

I want to pass through the other side of the tunnel

And so I write leaving this paper trail

To get me back through

If not for me then for you

Only after you learn that

I WRITE BECAUSE PAPER LISTENS




Here is a quick re-write there were so mistakes that I had'nt noticed but now it's the way that I want it if you don't like it then don't read it . try some of my others and I will comment on yours just the same


Re: I Write Becasue Paper Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by allidoiswrite82 on Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 07:27:55 PM AEST
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Here is a quick re-write there were so mistakes that I had'nt noticed but now it's the way that I want it if you don't like it then don't read it . try some of my others and I will comment on yours just the same


I write because the paper listens

And I'm inspired when the stars glisten

Sometimes it seems I've been passed up because somethings missing

And I'm so far beyond irreconcilable differences

It Seems like I've been given this mission

Praying and wishing

That one day I'll be the center of attention

The apple of everyones eye

The rose that grow from the concrete

That smooth relaxing path of street

That you just cant wait until it meets your feet

I want to be that thirst that moves you

The Saturday night beat that grooves you

That gentle hand that sooths you

It's not just about what I do to you

I want to be you

At three o'clock in the morning come see you

Give you my scriptures then bleed you

Show you, not just tell you that I need you

See I write because the paper listens

So when the words beat like a motor pistons

And you read these phases that I've given

You know I'm somewhere kissing

paper to pen

perhaps adding this in

Just to make it relate

I'm in a place where bliss cant go missin

White pages like forever fields

If nothing else this can't end

I've made lovers of these inanimate objects and made them speak like a true friend

And if you don't understand then there is no way you could be in the place that I'm in

I write because the paper listen

And it wont ridicule me for these thoughts in the distances

If enlightenment is a sentence Then life is what I been given

And I wouldn't pass on it either

Nor require my muse to award me a breather

I want to pass through the other side of the tunnel

And so I write leaving this paper trail

To get me back through

If not for me then for you

Only after you learn that

I WRITE BECAUSE PAPER LISTENS






Re: I Write Becasue Paper Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_blue on Saturday, 22nd March 2008 @ 07:11:09 PM AEST
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i write because paper listens, my sentiments exactly. well put. keep writing


Re: I Write Becasue Paper Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by althea_kendry on Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 08:57:02 AM AEST
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i like this poem a lot gd job :)




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