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Love's Prominence
Contributed by
Kellros
on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 10:04:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
AnniversaryPoems
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She's like the last word in a novel,
the epithet of climax...
her love, like a glove,
that fits snug, ever proceeding...
Immortal, love.
Vast blue oceans would barely compare
to her sapphire eyes' stare
and the sparkle lights more in me
than a thousand stars on a cloudless night.
Like the loneliness of a crowded room
suddenly blooming with the presence of One,
that the romance of cuddling by fireside
barely scratch the comparison of her.
A love unlike addiction, an obsession of passion
as if rain fell from the heavens
and the dew drops lay in a kiss
of imputed desire...
Angel face, a smile that invokes compassion
in a fast paced world
and as time stands still;
a moment passes that displaces
all the wrong doing of the world.
If simple words that come to mind
could only describe
the feelings within...
I love you.
Copyright ©
Kellros
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2008-03-04 10:04:29]
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Re: Love's Prominence
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 12:31:45 PM AEST
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This is a beautifully written declaration of your love.
Your descriptions are striking and heart felt.
Peace
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Re: Love's Prominence
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by brew on
Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 07:38:19 AM AEST
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Wow what flowing words, that pour from within.! Very beautiful
brew~ |
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Re: Love's Prominence
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 05:15:26 AM AEST
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Dis vrek mooi :) jy is gelukkig om iemand soos sy te hê! Koester dit elke dag, dit is spesiaal *
Groete daar
Anna |
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Re: Love's Prominence
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 05:15:34 AM AEST
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Dis vrek mooi :) jy is gelukkig om iemand soos sy te hê! Koester dit elke dag, dit is spesiaal *
Groete daar
Anna |
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