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CHAPTER
Contributed by
prabal77
on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 05:25:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This is no fun, no play, no game
something about me and rest is the same
ups and downs,slums and crowns
floating above and sometimes drowned.
this is book of my life.........
how it moves, twist and rolls
book marked by some page folds
you can read it again and after
this is bonded all in chapters
Happy as ever, this is chapter one.
filled with love and playing in the sun
never thought about myself,
is it nice and will it help?
everything was there, whatever i need
no sign of sadness,i always succeed.
i felt good before and after
don't relax this is just one chapter...
Meaning of life is looking so new.
you see this is chapter number two
beta, theta and all those reactions
judge by grades, not by actions
life looks now full of test
you 'll be dead, if your not the best
comes with dawn a whole new picture
eternity or just another chapter....
Waves are hitting shores very hard
is Mr. fate is tossing a new card
difficult to stand and retain the balance
needed a helpin hand,to face the challenge
the light of success shines so far away.
but the path is coloured black or grey.
sorrows and sighs,when laughs are few
this is chapter three,and it still continues...
I've decided, what i wanna do,
i need no help, neither you
won't pretend,person;i don't know,
leave me now,i wanna grow.
there's one fact worth not a miss
that, only ignorance is bliss.
now I've let loose & break free
this,part two of chapter three...
This is a whole new chapter four
sometimes salt,sweet,bitter n sour.
i am; what i wanted to be
on the top and flying free
worries and sins,can't set me back
made my way out of the sack.
there perspective,about to alter
here,Mr.fate unfolds new chapter.
Copyright ©
prabal77
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2008-03-04 05:25:53]
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Re: CHAPTER
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by BornReckless on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 06:30:14 AM AEST
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| I really like the concept, but the execution could have been better for me. The flow is kinda jagged, but all in all its a good poem. |
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Re: CHAPTER
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by emystar on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 08:32:21 PM AEST
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Well I like it just like it is. ithink it's very creative and unique.
huggs,
emy |
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