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Whispers And Confusion.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 03:53:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Peel off my skin
Because I'm screaming
Clawing from within
Deep breaths
I can get through this
No I can't
I can't explain
The pain
Deep breaths
I'm shaking
This happens everyday
I'm breaking
Will you help me...
Somebody help me
I can get through this
No I can't
You don't understand
The sadness has taken command
Trapped in a cage
This pent up rage
Frustration
Just help me
I'm so cold
So alone
It hurts so bad
Everything I lost
Was all I ever had
Trying to convince myself
I can be okay
But deep down I know
That I'm just withering away
And anyday
Might be my final mistake
Pain coupled with fear
I got an angel on one shoulder
And the devil on the other
Whispering in my ear
One says that I'm gonna be okay
The other one says todays the day
To end it all
I can get through this
No I can't...
Deep breaths
I'm so confused...
I'm so confused.
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Re: Whispers And Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 ) by mashley06 on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 05:07:41 AM AEST (User
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I really like it. The pain and anguish is so obvious. Great job |
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Re: Whispers And Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 05:10:44 AM AEST (User
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this is a tragical masterpiece.. very passionate and deep feeling in sadness and extreme painful emotions.. you have written this well!! beautiful job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Whispers And Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Removed on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 05:58:41 AM AEST (User
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Have you gotten past it, or do you think feeling this is a normal occurance to experience agian and agian? i haven't a clue if it is normal. If it is normal i fear life to be more like a torturous death. When ever i find myself feeling that way i see how much i suck at life. How can other people be so happy and carefree? is it ignorance, or inner strength??? I do not know... I am confuzed as well.
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Re: Whispers And Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 ) by BornReckless on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 06:36:10 AM AEST (User
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You layed it down on this one!! but you always do. This poem is like...a thought inside of a thought...awesome. |
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Re: Whispers And Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 ) by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 05:47:54 AM AEST (User
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A piece I can completely relate to. I feel you in this as much as I feel my own pain in my heart.
Peace
~Shannon |
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