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Crying Clouds, Mortal Pain
Contributed by
farscape_prophet
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Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 06:52:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Crying clouds show their pain
From Heaven's gates tears fall like pouring rain
An angel came from Heaven's grace
As a mortal soul yearns for her loving embrace
Upon her wings I wish to soar
Beyond all pain forever more
To spend eternity with her would be the greatest gift
Because every time I look into her eyes or hear her voice the ground beneath my feet begins to shift
I love her more than anything
For it is only her love that with it true happiness does bring
2007
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2008-03-03 06:52:50]
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Re: Crying Clouds, Mortal Pain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 08:59:37 AM AEST
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Beautifully written I must say. And sounds like a tragic loss of someone whom you must have loved and if you love this person that much you should tell them. Emotional and deep. Well written.
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Re: Crying Clouds, Mortal Pain
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 03:31:12 PM AEST
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It is soulfully tragic almost with a beauty beneath the surface.......... It seems as though there is grief mixed with a longing for loving someone that cannot be.....
Michelle |
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