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Nightmare of Reality
Contributed by
farscape_prophet
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Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 06:34:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nightmare of reality seems so surreal
Is she lashing out because she is hurt or is hate what she really does feel
Nightmare of reality, like falling rain upon my head coming down
In my love for her and in the regret for what I have done, gasping for air I have begun to drown
Watching birds fly over head with such purpose and certainty
Wishing this nightmare was just a dream but in all truth it is reality
It is said that nightmares arent real when in all actuality they are
They can show things of the past or of the future, however near or far
Wanting to take a negative and turn it into a positive, a nightmare into a dream
For it is this reality oh how surrealit does seem
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Re: Nightmare of Reality
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 09:18:25 AM AEST
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i feel like the girl that is lashing out, but i dont know if its because i feel hate.
this is deep and i love it.
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Re: Nightmare of Reality
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 08:56:49 AM AEST
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Wow. Powerful, dark and full of emotions. I liked this a lot. Nightmares seem to be like a second skin to some and those nightmares we can never seem to defeat the grasp it holds on us. Well done and I hope that made sense.
Take care
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Re: Nightmare of Reality
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 03:35:14 PM AEST
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Reality has a way to sneak up and bite doesn't it?
Nightmares....... well they are everywhere....... even when not asleep..... drowning in the beds of our desires the petals soon become the thorn......
WOw now that is wicked thought isn't it??
Intently woven write here good job....... Lots to think on.
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