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Who's Judging Now!
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Silver slices, pause time,
four legged friend, faithfully stands near,
denied are thy memories,
soaking morning blush , behind seven shades,
~~~
Circumstance my human vineyard,
knelt none before me,
judgement had wondered in,
waves spin the clock,
in wait I see nothing ..... but a blank wall,
~~~
Ceilings cracked, by others' screams,
years spent trapped, behind bars,
What rest will follow me,
dreams carry no dance,
a black hallway becomes my home,
~~~
I cry tears alone ..... behind a steel wall,
'who's looking',
only those with judgement in their eyes,
~~~
Spend one day with me,
my sorrows numb and dry,
the ones I leave behind are hounded,
dogs running wild,
the liner of their pocket ..... greed,
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Their dance coated silver,
they won the trial,
my defeat goes un-noticed,
I become nothing,
~~~
Years pass ..... I remain locked, drowned,
encased by systems brand,
I holler, but I'm left nothing,
unshaded echoes fill my space,
~~~
My youth slids away ..... none notice,
I am just a number in a bruise,
slipping thru time,
'So long" a letter reads,
my wend holds the path,
behind barbed wire,
~~~
' Where was he when I needed him',
another cries out,
it shivers a dance thru my very veins,
Long gone is my mercy,
wicked steers, took my very youth,
who's watching now,
when all I see is a hallway of darkness,
spots aging my very youth,
~~~
'What crime have I committed,
the keeper returns an answer,
"Born poor, Son, Born poor"
~~~
Suddenly a vision appears,
three crosses on calvary,
In judgement hangs the Lord,
my very God, thee Savior,
His last words,
"Come home child, you are mine"
the gate of life is open,
my soul is free!
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Valerie_Pearson
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:27:35 AM AEST
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| Val,Really well done on this! So many are JUDGED! I Like the part where it saids"Come home child you are mine!"Great write! Christina |
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by Icequeen on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 09:22:07 AM AEST
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| Ohhhh, very good. |
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 09:33:53 AM AEST
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| excellent write valerie:) huggs and love always nessa |
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:16:41 PM AEST
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| another wonderful write. |
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 07:02:02 PM AEST
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| Wow Valerie, I had to read this a number of times to take in all your words - you have a very deep and powerful message in there ... incredibly tormented ... but in the end I was almost glad to read your last lines - it made me feel so much better :)))) Outstanding poem .... love Jan |
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 08:14:47 AM AEST
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Hi Val,
How truly beautiful you are, your love flows from the deepest well, your wisdom and understanding are boundless.
This write is very special to me.
Thank you my friend,
Hugz,
Fwog |
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 09:31:20 PM AEST
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This poem is awesome
So much truth in it
All I can say is- Wish I could write with such wisdom--Russ
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 04:33:37 PM AEST
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| an amazing poem |
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 10:16:21 PM AEST
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Valerie, this was a very beautiful, awesome write. I was hanging onto your every word. So much emotion in this piece. I wish I could write a piece like this.
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 05:05:46 PM AEST
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Valerie, this is great. You have a great imagination and poetic skill. Keep writing!
Bizzy |
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Re: Who's Judging Now!
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 05:40:09 AM AEST
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Wow this is so true and very good writting.
We can always find what we need at the foot of his cross.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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