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Memories
Contributed by
GaryPurchase
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Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 10:47:06 PM in AEST
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Alone with memories
Times long past
Long hot summers
Imagination so vast
Games of delight
Cats and dogs
The odd fight
Smell of blossom
Taste of plums
Lamingtons
Sad teen years
My dad’s death
Lots of tears
My mum’s strength
Childhood gone
My first kiss
She was blonde
Can’t go back
Yet I find
Always can
In my mind
Copyright ©
GaryPurchase
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2008-03-02 22:47:06]
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Re: Memories
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 11:07:18 PM AEST
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| Memories are always there, this is what shapes our lives sometimes. Good write, I understand it so very well. Sue x |
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Re: Memories
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by constantlyme on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 03:53:03 AM AEST
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The memories of things past is what makes us who we are... its funny the little, sometimes insignificant things we seem to recall. Lovely write.
Danielle |
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Re: Memories
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 04:35:29 AM AEST
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This was completely nostalgic. I found myself running through many
of my own memories at the insistence of your words.
'Tis true we cannot go back, but sometimes running through the
thought in your mind is sweeter than the actual moment, you know?
Enjoyable write. :)
~Breezy
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Re: Memories
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by purplestary on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 12:31:17 PM AEST
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| awsome write.. i love the form of this..the way you went through the memories...It's how our mind realy does remember the memories..simple, just the main point, the main subject of the memory i guess...thanks for posting. |
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Re: Memories
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by ZiggyB on
Monday, 21st April 2008 @ 03:36:01 PM AEST
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I like the style - it works well here.
Memories, both bitter and sweet...all stepping stones to beyond.
Good write. |
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