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Depths of my mind
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 07:01:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As the storm keep on building the lies
trying to break down all that I am
I try to stand with my head held high
hiding the fear that build in my eyes
Waves crashing, licking at my feet
Threatening to sweep me away
in the arms of hate and despair.
Can't do this alone
not good enough
Memories seep through my veins
as the feeling of endlessness carry me away
into the sweet madness
in my mind.
Copyright ©
SilverRain
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2008-03-02 19:01:42]
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Re: Depths of my mind
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 09:32:32 AM AEST
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wow, this is insane.
i can really relate. especially to "as the feeling of endlessness carry me away into the sweet madness in my mind"
I love it.
Hugs
Ravyn |
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Re: Depths of my mind
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 09:35:52 AM AEST
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Awesome write!
Intense emotions and movement...
Deep,Dark and "Alive"...
Well expressed.
~~Oceandreamer~~
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Re: Depths of my mind
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by alibof10 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 06:38:16 AM AEST
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| outstanding writing |
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Re: Depths of my mind
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by xxILoveTheSilencexx on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 06:26:53 AM AEST
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wow very deep and beautiful.....=)
keep up the nice work... |
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