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Why Am I Given This?
Contributed by
orangeman
on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A heart of fear
A cloud of anger
A tear of stress
A cry of danger
A frown of sadness
A feeling that’s lifeless
A word of darkness
A friend of loneliness
A world of war
A thought to distroy
A shadow of sin
A chance that won’t begin
A sea of emptiness
A goal without sucess
A touch of death
A life that was left
A eye that cannot see
A ear that cannot listen
For these were the things I was given
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2003-03-11 07:00:00]
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Re: Why Am I Given This?
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by Sexygirl on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:35:11 AM AEST
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| Cheer up ......I hope you feel better about yourself.....You have covered so much hurt in this poem.....You have a real talent....what will you write next.....maybe a secret love.....best of luck...take care |
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Re: Why Am I Given This?
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 01:24:49 PM AEST
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| oohh...i love this... |
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Re: Why Am I Given This?
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by Gribba on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 03:20:04 PM AEST
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WOW!!!
I know these feelings and you just told me with words what they are!!!
I like how you take the sences and make them come alife and each sentens makes me want to read more. |
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Re: Why Am I Given This?
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 01:17:13 AM AEST
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Great poem very emotional hopefully writing out how u feel helps u deal with itbetter. Keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Why Am I Given This?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 01:30:59 AM AEST
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Great depth shown here... Loved this...
Jenni |
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