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Constantly
Contributed by
constantlyme
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Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 04:33:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There is no peace or quiet.
You are constant.
I drown and you are the water that chokes me.
I breathe and you are the air I inhale.
It does not come and go.
You are constant.
They say time heals everything.
Yet as it passes each day, I die a little more
And you grow stronger inside me.
You are constant.
I look in the mirror and it is you I see
And wonder if I am ever given even a fleeting thought.
Do you remember me at all?
I remember you
You consume me entirely.
Unknowingly you possess every inch of my being.
Because you...
YOU, are constant.
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constantlyme
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2008-03-02 04:33:48]
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Re: Constantly
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by AnenaLynne on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 11:00:39 AM AEST
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really really liked it...loved the subject and the way it was worded!
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Re: Constantly
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by MakeShift_2134 on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 11:24:08 AM AEST
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| I loved the flow. Great poem. Remember that time does not heal but with enough time. Memories will fade and it will be easier. |
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Re: Constantly
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by BRIDGI on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 01:08:20 PM AEST
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i liked it alot.....
good wording....
didnt express emotion too much....
yet you did...
with your words...
the emotion behind them....
i liked it...
BRidgete |
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Re: Constantly
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by elle on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 02:10:04 PM AEST
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greetings to you, constantlyme,
i appaude you. . . the concept of oblivion only stakes our heart to loves' cross, stonger, harded. within the shadow of awareness comes the constancy of lose & yet I would not trade loves' lessons for the world. the degree of pain always correlates to the depth of our love. the price most appropriate for the treasure hidden in the pleasure or in the pain. . . again bravo. peace to you. . . elle |
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Re: Constantly
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by constantlyme on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 03:15:57 AM AEST
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| Thanks so much for your comments. This is the first time I’ve ever let anyone read anything I’ve written. It means the world to have even one positive comment left. Thank you. |
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