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Father of Mine
Contributed by
elle
on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 02:38:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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in my attempt
to embrace
the feeling of love,
to capture
the meaning of truth,
to experience
the essence of beauty,
to realize
the revelation of time
I come to find
You. . .
again & again.
& from You
every wonderful manner. . .
I realize
all good & worthwhile
springs eternally
from You,
through You.
home of my heart.
womb of my soul. . .
let me return
to You
ever blessed
& blessing.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2008-03-01 14:38:05]
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Re: Father of Mine
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 04:39:06 PM AEST
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| I like the style of the poem you've written here, the repetition, the ellipses, all of it adds to the themes to create a very emotive write. I enjoyed this piece very much, well done. |
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Re: Father of Mine
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by Spike on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 08:38:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful and peaceful, even in its handling of a tribulating theme of searching (both introspective and external). A difficult search, because even if its for the meaning of love and life, hardships have to be endured, self has to be confronted.
A wonderfully comfortable end.
Spike |
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