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You Can't but I Can
Contributed by
mashley06
on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 02:05:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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You can use me, hate me
Love me, understand me
Abuse me, rape me
Touch me, underestimate me
You can’t bring me down
Only I can do this
Head in the clouds
Come down from there
Silly girl your way behind
Watch them stare
Only fools falling short in your mind
Watery eyes looking onward
Wipe your tears and run
Faster and farther
Towards the sun
No longer hurting or hating
Full of life and love
A quick gasp and no more suffocating
Copyright ©
mashley06
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2008-03-01 14:05:19]
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Re: You Can't but I Can
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by elle on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 02:43:30 PM AEST
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| bravo! elle. |
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Re: You Can't but I Can
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 03:40:59 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. The flow was great. I liked how you wrote this poem and how you expressed the fact that no one can tear you down except yourself and sometimes that is a powerful thing to control. Bravo.
Take care
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Re: You Can't but I Can
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by InfinitePoet on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 09:59:43 AM AEST
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Awesome!!!
We have A very similar style!! If you care to read a few of mine sometime!! Keep writing & Keep sharing!! Keep up the good work!!
Peace!
PepperMint |
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Re: You Can't but I Can
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 10:38:34 AM AEST
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love it. never let anyone bring you down
Ravyn |
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