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Parting
Contributed by
shelby
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Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 12:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Through mist and rain
we felt tears fall
capturing each other and parting.
Essence mixed with softness,
where is the sweetness in sorrow.
Why do we trace every moment,
and lie with its pain at night.
rain falls tracing this window
wind whispers our thoughts.
Lover`s kiss from the depths you remember
brings no light to the heart..
you cry at every beginning
somewhere inside it remains....Shelby/ Vincent
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shelby
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2008-03-01 12:12:46]
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Re: Parting
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by BRIDGI on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 12:37:01 PM AEST
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wow....
alot of feeling...
i know how you feel...
been through it before....
but things will get better and eventualy it wont hurt as bad...
but the feeling never really goes away...
but over time it wont hurt as bad....
good luck |
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Re: Parting
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 05:08:15 PM AEST
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wow this is extremely powerful and passionate in emotions.. its very errily sad and makes you think about certain things .. this is beautious!! great job
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Parting
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by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 12:16:50 AM AEST
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Awesome write...like always!
Raw emotions and passionate.
Beautiful words...
A touching write that leaves it's mark!
Well done Shelby.
~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: Parting
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 12:05:21 PM AEST
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good job my friends
Shari |
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Re: Parting
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by GingerB on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 03:52:51 PM AEST
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Great collaboration, you two....
Beautifully written altthogh so sad..
Hugs
Jenni |
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