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My Wretched Self
Contributed by
Vampy
on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 06:12:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Looking in the mirror
makes me sick
Every little flaw
stands out to me,
makes me retch.
Fat is everywhere,
my hips are too big
Oh, I wish I were
ten pounds lighter.
I feel like I'm alone
because I'm too ugly,
too fat, just not good enough
for anyone-
but everyone says I'm beautiful,
so that cannot be true.
It's all in my head
When I look in the mirror,
it's just a virtual image,
nothing real.
I'd be bones without
those ten pounds,
I'd be a boy
without those hips,
no fat exists.
It's all an illusion,
my mind needs to clear.
I'm fine this way,
I'm pretty like
they all say.
But tomorrow morning
I'll feel different...
I'll look in the mirror
and once again retch,
feel disgusting.
When will this end?
Copyright ©
Vampy
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2002-07-30 06:12:39]
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Re: My Wretched Self
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 09:15:41 AM AEST
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| i have known girls and boys who are model material, yet still feel they are disgustingly ugly... i am one of these. i felt this poem deep inside even tho i am a guy. just let it all out vampy. |
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Re: My Wretched Self
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 11:44:33 AM AEST
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| This was really good. I feel exactly like that, that's why I don't eat. Great emotions in it too. I loved it. |
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