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Giving up
Contributed by
mlcarter369
on
Friday, 29th February 2008 @ 04:57:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I walked right in
sawyou sitting there
you looked me in the eyes
I turned away and said it isn't fair
I know it's my fault
guess i should have listened
when everyone was saying
he isn't worth getting with
Don't know why
I let my heart take control
Don't know why
I let you get into my soul
But i'm giving up now
you helped me see the light
I'm letting you go
though my hearts putting up a fight
Copyright ©
mlcarter369
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2008-02-29 16:57:19]
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Re: Giving up
(User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 02:06:49 AM AEST
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| well its never easy giving up on somebody you love but you have to |
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Re: Giving up
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by althea_kendry on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 03:28:28 AM AEST
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i reli like this poem i no EXACTLY where ur comin from, this happened to me too. its a gd feelin knowin i'm not th only one whom this kinda stuff happens too
gd poem n plz keep writin :) |
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Re: Giving up
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by blackrose233 on
Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 03:48:49 AM AEST
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| I really like it good write |
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