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My Path.
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Thursday, 28th February 2008 @ 03:07:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My backward glaze on the misty path I once
passed, paused a moment, amazed to peer at
my childhood past; sprayed with colors of hope,
joy and bliss that pealed like a chapel bell.
The misty path gloomed a bit vision I saw a bitter
bit, Youthful though I was, yet tears of trial left
Trail of sorrow, my fortune doomed, love lost, darkness
surround, looked above for the heaven to console.
In midst of the darkened path under the murky sight
my old self, sauntered fast with faith brimming to find
The dot of light called hope that I had long lost, never too
late, so I thought, here I ‘m on the very same path.
Life today is not so very dark, not lonely any more,
for faith to accompany beyond the end of my path.
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2008-02-28 15:07:04]
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Re: My Path.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th March 2008 @ 09:56:30 AM AEST
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Wow Franco! What an inspiring and uplifting piece! We all have our
crosses to bear, it seems and look upon our past with some indifference
and pain and regret. But through it all there is an encouragement that
cannot be silenced! It's lovely (so lovely!) how you ended this with the
positive side of remembrance. Many could do with reading this and
heeding the wonderful byproduct of advice in it.
Peace, my poet friend
~Breezy |
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Re: My Path.
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by wizard on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 02:12:58 PM AEST
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great piece Franco,
excellent writing,
wiz |
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