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Rise sweet spring!
Contributed by
mckayla
on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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oh how I long for the sun
pouring brilliant rays
against my skin
waiting for the first flower to bloom
my nose longs
for the sweet smell
rain drops warm
falling down to feed
the green
ah spring is coming soon
to rid away these
winter blues!
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mckayla
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2003-03-11 04:00:00]
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Re: Rise sweet spring!
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:25:51 AM AEST
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| simply beautiful. venkat |
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Re: Rise sweet spring!
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 07:11:36 PM AEST
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| beautifully written, love this:) |
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Re: Rise sweet spring!
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 10:42:52 PM AEST
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so true, so beautiful...a lovely read...nicely done, katherine...
ta
rosie |
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Re: Rise sweet spring!
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 09:17:06 PM AEST
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| aren't we all waiting for spring to arrive ... esp. us in New England |
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Re: Rise sweet spring!
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 02:21:37 PM AEST
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i cant wait either makayla...thank you for sharing....its beautiful..
Lindsey |
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Re: Rise sweet spring!
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:28:41 PM AEST
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| it is so true, i think you have spoken for many of us in this poem, well done |
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Re: Rise sweet spring!
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by Apartment213 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 02:27:08 AM AEST
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| yes someone bring the sun....maybe with more poems like this |
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Re: Rise sweet spring!
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:02:02 AM AEST
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| this is a beautifull way of writing about a less then cheerfull feeling, well done I wish I had the skill to do that |
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