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Knife #15 In My Back
Contributed by
ChristopherFriedrich
on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
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Salt on my lips from a kiss with a coward
You want me dead, but won't live without me
Backstabbed by you and your fourteen knives
The fifteenth is bound to finish me off
But will you stick it in?
Will you puncture the kidney of the one who loves you most?
Your love for me is like water in a desert
Is it really ever there?
I pour my heart out and you close your ears
Sometimes I want number fifteen as much as you do
And that's when I feel like giving up and buying you that knife
So you can stop me in my tracks when you end it all
And waste me like I did with my love for you
You discarded it, because it meant nothing
"I love you"...right ear, left ear..it went all the way through
Did you even hear me?
Are you immune to anything I say?
At least tell me you can read this
So, you'd rather stick me with your knife?
Make sure you di it while this pen is in my hand
So that you can remember me for my bloody words
Copyright ©
ChristopherFriedrich
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2003-03-11 02:40:00]
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Re: Knife #15 In My Back
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by mckayla on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 01:27:59 PM AEST
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Ouch you must be feeling really hurt. Great write. the feeling of this poem reminds me of the poem I wrote called Black rose.
mckayla |
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Re: Knife #15 In My Back
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 01:33:04 PM AEST
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Wow, I really like the way you worded with.
great talent.
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Re: Knife #15 In My Back
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:08:07 AM AEST
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| excellent excellent excellent... angry and passionate at the same time... i love the image of the desert and water the referral to a mirage... great poem... blessings... |
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Re: Knife #15 In My Back
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 06:47:17 AM AEST
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| great poem, so many good lines in it, i am awestruck by the attitudes in it |
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