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IF SICSSORS COULD TALK
Contributed by
timmy2scoops
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Saturday, 23rd February 2008 @ 04:37:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It never rains on the sun
it never snows on my tounge
the burns of fire is never fun
better 2 than olny 1
less is never more
the rich - his puffy pillow
the poor - his dirty floor
life has got me thinkin
no bath and i'd be stinkin
i don't need a razor
my beard's my olny saviour
trade my fish for a lizzard
talkin 2 my favorite sicssors
guess what, their talkin back
told me i need a hat
a dis w/out a dat
a pudd w/out a tat
a what- a who- a when -a were- a why -a then -a that
wished i'd hav never listened 2 my sicssors
i dried my fish off and he smelled
i think he like the water
so me-so you -o well
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Re: IF SICSSORS COULD TALK
(User Rating: 1 )
by Harmony on
Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 09:32:17 AM AEST
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I liked that alot! fantastic! i dont do critique because i am rubbish :D
Tata
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Re: IF SICSSORS COULD TALK
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by brew on
Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 02:58:07 PM AEST
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Differ my fellow poet, well expressed yet lots of spelling errors..next time spell..check.....all n all .cute
brew!~ |
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Re: IF SICSSORS COULD TALK
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by timmy2scoops on
Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 09:38:03 PM AEST
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| spell it how it sounds thatz part of my poet-tree |
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