|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Hold On
Contributed by
wizard
on
Saturday, 23rd February 2008 @ 04:07:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
|
Hold on my son, don’t fret just yet
For your days shall soon be grand;
And if they’re met with some regret
I’ll be beside you to lend my hand.
With each and every step you take
A new journey will begin;
Stay true to yourself and you will make
A journey that you’ll always win.
Each journey is but an hour long...
So don’t plan too far ahead,
With each step you’ll be forever strong
And ready for the coming tread.
When you need an open ear
To catch a troubled thought or two;
Or a shoulder to catch a tear,
I’ll be there each time for you.
Copyright ©
wizard
... [
2008-02-23 16:07:10]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on
Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 11:55:26 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Well the category is accurate, this really is an inspiring poem. It's almost as if it emphasizes potential, and possibilities--like the world is just waiting to be explored, and you'll always be there to help. I enjoyed this piece, well done. |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by brew on
Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 01:37:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great write Paul
Long time no see
Hold on is a wonderful title
If you have kids, yes......
beautiful
brew~ |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 06:22:20 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is so beautiful and simply written that I got caught up in the imagery and emotion, over the word choice. Usually I find myself having to read poetry slowly while dissecting each word to grasp the meaning. While this may be one of my shortcomings, this particular poem spoke to my heart directly. If only everyone could be a parent such as you. Thank you!
~Jess |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
