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Meaning lost for ... I Love You
Contributed by
UnknownLegend
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Saturday, 23rd February 2008 @ 02:19:43 PM in AEST
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InternetLove
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The words "I Love You" spoken,......... is it rhetoric or the truth?
forgotten with age, gone with time .........and seems was lost with youth
Elation, just for the moment ..... or will these feelings stay
most internet romance you will find, the words they soon decay
It's magic when is spoken,......... the first time "I Love You"
the words they sound oh so sweet, the passion how it grew
"I Love You" ..... let us do declare .... our love for all to see
we'll dance ..send smiles .. we'll blow a kiss ...a hurt yet soon to be
Deception and lies do soon abound .... the "I Love You's" seem shallow
love once so true is now surreal ... these words they soon will follow.
"I Love You" tho' you're far way ..I'll love you more, just stay that way"
This message is so vivid now.... your pledge of love a broken vow
those hugs and kisses you once shared .....seem so far and distant now
The "I Love you's" said oh so free... it's true they did abound
but now like leaves, yet to be raked ... lying on the ground
Somewhere thru time, "I Love You" .......was lost along with trust
for if something good is to survive .... "I Truly Love you" is a must
Copyright ©
UnknownLegend
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2008-02-23 14:19:43]
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Re: Meaning lost for ... I Love You
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by shelby on
Saturday, 23rd February 2008 @ 02:54:34 PM AEST
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Truth and wisdom in this poem.
Yes I do agree.
But now like leaves, yet to be raked that line so powerful...... Loved this entire write
Michelle |
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Re: Meaning lost for ... I Love You
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by brew on
Saturday, 23rd February 2008 @ 03:35:49 PM AEST
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Those 3 words........wow!
Can one trust
Hmmmmmmmm
Cant say i do.....yet....to anyones
too much
great tho, hope it finds *ones trust*
brew~ |
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Re: Meaning lost for ... I Love You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 01:26:33 AM AEST
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Yes, humans are a fickle bunch, are they not? We seem to fall in and out of
love so easily it seems. Sad, I know. There were times I thought I was in
love, but found out it wasn't true. How do we really know? I mean ever?
The feelings of infatuation can be so deceiving. It drives us insane sometimes.
I have been on both sides of this coin and either way, it is no fun. Love can
be so beautiful, but when it is lost ... completely and utterly devastating.
But the heart is a most resilient thing! It has the power to heal ...
Powerful last line! Incredible write!
~Breezy |
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Re: Meaning lost for ... I Love You
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by kismetkills on
Thursday, 5th February 2009 @ 12:58:15 AM AEST
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| wow i really "truly" love this poem. it's really thought out. |
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Re: Meaning lost for ... I Love You
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by veronicablue on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 01:08:50 PM AEST
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I love this poem. In my opinion the words "I love you" are far too easy to say. Let's see the actions to back them up. But I do believe that everyone loves differently. I guess we can't impose "our" expectations of love upon others....
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Re: Meaning lost for ... I Love You
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 10:44:47 AM AEST
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absolutely agree! it is easy for some to dismiss
us when online as if feelings aren't real and
valid, sadly they are, and hearts can still be just
as broken, excellent write my friend,
hugs n' love nessa |
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