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[[Casting Cynical Woes]] Into The Dawn's Agony
Contributed by
wretched_reflections
on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 10:04:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Cynicism has no place here
Gently trace those shaded eyes
Edging along a melancholic breeze
Your hair feigns a violent sunrise
Enlivening this ashen haste
Our affliction blossoms
Serenity captured from your presence
Fleeting numbness
Disfigured after all the losses of self
Restraint worthless
Chains can't hold this down
With compulsion the light spawns
Enlivening this ashen haste
Our affliction blossoms
As the sun gets fainter and fainter
I'll ignite the sky and set effigy ablaze
Sulfur clouds vision
And the sun gets fainter and fainter
Every part of you buried beneath the horizon
Please just keep this promise,
I know you've lied before
Our affliction burns
Affection returns to bloom in flames..
IN FLAMES PASSION RISES.
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2008-02-22 10:04:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: [[Casting Cynical Woes]] Into The Dawn's Agony
(User Rating: 1 ) by 5MinutePoet on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 12:07:53 PM AEST (User
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Hi, i like it. Great style, good scheme.
Wish i figured out how to write in bold, it definately adds a little something |
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