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Revolutions of Suicide
Contributed by
Jinnifuru_Sohma
on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 09:58:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Right now.
If I took my own life...
Would you notice?
Would you care?
Would you even miss me?
If i took my life this instant...
Would you regret anything?
Would you feel bad for the times you ditched me?
Said mean things behind my back?
Or broke my heart countless times even though i forgave you?
If I ended it all right here...
Would you finally notice that things hadn't been okay?
That my smile was fake?
And my laugh was forced?
Or that my eyes were heavy with sadness?
If suicide seemed my only option...
Would you be right by my side?
Do everything in your power to keep me here?
Tell me you love me and hold me close?
Or even believe that I had the guts to do it?
I'm slowly fading towards the darkness...
so much more comforting compared to all you've put me through...
You're my last strand of hope...
I need you.... love you.. yet I always ask that question...
Would you...
Well?
Would you?
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Re: Revolutions of Suicide
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by Saloni on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 10:20:12 AM AEST
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very nicely written poem... don't do anything stupid! its not worth it ! life's a gift from god.. i know we go through good things and bad.. thats life for us! don't give up your life for someone like that! u deserve better... i know the love is there and u tend to miss the person alot.. but dont do such thing !
remember ur special and u deserve so much better than this !
take care
lots of hugs n prayers
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Re: Revolutions of Suicide
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by 5MinutePoet on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 11:09:16 AM AEST
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Why do you see so many people in this situation?
Live for yourself, do as you wish but wish not for what you could do.
Go out there and take it and if anyone else tries to own you, take them too |
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