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One day I'll fly away...
Contributed by
madhusudan
on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 11:45:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Drifting away...no matter where you are...
Flying...hurting...smiling...wanting....
Somethings wrong...I can't go on
Someone help me fly away...
I take my time...I have everything I want
He holds your hands and I drop down
Do I want to live in this world?
I'd rather fly away...
Miles and miles...endless space.
As I take the wings to the sky...
Someone tell her what I'm going through!
And God, let me come closer to you!
Twisted dreams..tortured soul
The times I cried, keeping things inside
There's no way...I know I have to go away
One day I'll fly away...One day I'll fly away....
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madhusudan
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2008-02-21 23:45:09]
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Re: One day I'll fly away...
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by brew on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 06:03:09 AM AEST
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Yes very emotional.....This piece, makes one feel the heart pour out, and render all broken pieces of life. I enjoyed reading this, even tho it was sad....
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Re: One day I'll fly away...
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by Jinnifuru_Sohma on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 10:45:26 AM AEST
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| awe.. sweetie i know exactly what you're going through right now.. oh how i know... |
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Re: One day I'll fly away...
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by Jinnifuru_Sohma on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 10:45:27 AM AEST
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| awe.. sweetie i know exactly what you're going through right now.. oh how i know... |
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Re: One day I'll fly away...
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by shelby on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 06:38:20 PM AEST
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We shall all lift up and fly together for a day and just be free.
This touched my heart deeply, the way in which you wrote it with the ... gave it even more depth.
I felt you in this one. Those are the ones I enjoy the most, a poem that makes me feel just what you are feeling and writing. Lovely work.
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