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Prisons
Contributed by
Contralogicus
on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My mind in fragments on the floor,
Sharp pains throughout my body soar,
Her quickly written words a warning?
Within my soul they lie still burning.
The true meaning evades my brain,
During the darkened night I strain,
Myself, frantically trying to explain,
Away possibilities of evil, my own disdain.
Knowing tonight I will not find,
Sleep of any nature or kind,
I focus all of my energy,
On trying to set her free.
Of prisons that keep her away,
From me and love and life and day,
From flowers in their lovely sway,
And sparkling waves that gentry spray.
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Contralogicus
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2003-03-10 23:40:00]
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Re: Prisons
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by undead_poet14 on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 10:55:15 AM AEST
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the part where you say: "The true meaning evades my brain,
During the darkened night I strain,
Myself, frantically trying to explain"
that's my favorite... so full of emotion... very powerful... keep writing! ^^
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Re: Prisons
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by ap on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 02:21:19 AM AEST
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nice... this too tells about a mind unable to rest... the insomnia...
now we hear the reason behind it... very good...
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Re: Prisons
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 04:54:03 PM AEST
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i cant think of any good words, but i like this a lot!
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