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A moon poem for mel
Contributed by
harmony
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Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 05:47:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Here we are with our eyes to the moon
and our backs to the old dead
In a chilled coat Melanie
withered in space
A trip to the moon
the edge of a cliff
as the earth is removed
and the repeating cuckoo
repeated
below our feet
Copyright ©
harmony
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2008-02-21 17:47:56]
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Re: A moon poem for mel
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by SilverRain on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 05:24:30 PM AEST
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| You poem creates a feeling of total bliss and contentment. Good write. |
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Re: A moon poem for mel
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by brew on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 08:18:55 AM AEST
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Your writes, portray so much more, than what some may actually, think. Good post.
brew~ |
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