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Many things Change. But not everything.
Contributed by
Delicate-Thorn
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Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 05:43:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have changed. Or maybe not.
How would you even know?
You know nothing of what is in my head.
Or my heart for that matter.
I let you in, and suddenly
You think you know me.
Well maybe you do.
You told me of your past;
Secrets you entrusted on to me.
I won't repeat.
But who's to say it won't happen again?
Remember last time?
I forgave you that's true.
That doesn't mean it doesn't haunt me.
I love you.
I do,
That will never change.
Or maybe it will
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Re: Many things Change. But not everything.
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 07:54:38 PM AEST
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I liked the confusion of thoughts sewn into this.
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Re: Many things Change. But not everything.
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by kiba on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 01:14:01 PM AEST
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I like the way you resolve the entire poem at the ending lines, that is a style I somewhat use also because I like it. so I really liked your poem.
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