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I Understand
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 01:36:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I have come to understand
That I can’t have you or your heart
No matter how hard I try
Your heart still belongs to someone else
Someone far better than me for sure
And I wish for your happiness
I thought I found what I want in you
But it all turns out to be just a dream
A sweet, sweet dream
That I wished I wouldn’t need to wake up from
But reality comes by
And the sun comes shining in the morning
The rain still stops by once a while
That is when I know reality is there
Waiting for me to explore
And to understand
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2008-02-21 13:36:45]
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Re: I Understand
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by 5MinutePoet on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 02:07:45 PM AEST
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hi, good core story.
nice and solid dose of self pity |
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Re: I Understand
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by emystar on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 02:21:28 PM AEST
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I don't see it as self pitty, we're all guilty of that at times.
What I see is healing, and a good dose of wisdom, after the fact.
Keep up the great work, my friend.
big huggs, luv, healin,
emy |
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Re: I Understand
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by brownsugar8272 on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 09:11:26 PM AEST
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| I feel the pain that you are trying to cope with. However I hope that when you said someone far better than you for sure was a sarcastic statement because please don't believe that. You are you and god doesn't make mistakes. |
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Re: I Understand
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 11:34:08 PM AEST
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a very sad but very expressive write, packed into this little poem.. good job here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: I Understand
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by madhusudan on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 04:52:30 AM AEST
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| Its funny how simple words can bring about such powerful emotions in them...i love this work... |
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