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When the Ink has Dried
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 06:02:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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His life he writes with pen and ink
As if to find the missing link
To decipher how he feels today
His pen it moves and shows the way
On paper he can vent his spleen
About all of those who treat him mean
His love for one , he writes in words
Without feeling a fool, or being absurd
He spills out his hopes and wishes too
Upon parchment , with ink of darkest blue
The words they come so fast and free
He is a master of calligraphy
His heart he writes with every line
His feelings and emotions shine
This writer has an eye for beauty
To write his thoughts tis but a duty
His words they are but his thoughts
From past encounters and wisdom taught
He writes them down with artistic pride
His work unfinished till the ink has dried
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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2008-02-21 06:02:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: When the Ink has Dried
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 09:37:34 AM AEST (User
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Sue this write is stunning and beautiful.
Writer has an eye for beauty oh how true it is.....
Lovely lovely work sweety.
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Re: When the Ink has Dried
(User Rating: 1 ) by 5MinutePoet on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 09:12:01 AM AEST (User
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It's good to see someone taking a pride in appearence.
God knows i dont |
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Re: When the Ink has Dried
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 11:38:13 PM AEST (User
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wow this is so true and full of feeling.. it just is wise in itself.. I love this write.. beauitiful job here
rock on,
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Re: When the Ink has Dried
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 08:24:06 PM AEST (User
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A fabulous tribute to the poet. Such a wonderful observation, from one who herself is a emotive poet. A graceful and delicate weave of sleek purity. You've captured truth in it's most pure with this work. Any poet should relate and be inspired. If indeed there is a specific subject to this work he should be touched beyond for such a glorious dedication. The proclamation of being a poet who "must write" that is a poet in every sense of the word. Just as the poem here is itself from a poet in every sense of the word.
BRAVO!
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Re: When the Ink has Dried
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Tuesday, 26th February 2008 @ 05:28:04 PM AEST (User
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Very nice. Excellent write thank you for sharing :)
Whisper |
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Re: When the Ink has Dried
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 11:34:21 AM AEST (User
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I loved the quirkiness of this and it just flows marvellously.
Thanks for taking time to share it will all us apsiring poets
Steve |
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Re: When the Ink has Dried
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 10:32:12 AM AEST (User
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Simply beautiful...I love the flow in this... Enjoyable read..
Jenni |
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Re: When the Ink has Dried
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 12:57:18 AM AEST (User
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exquisite! hugs n' love nessa |
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