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As I Drift
Contributed by
honey56
on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 12:53:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to say good night as I
Drift
Into my world of sleep
I counted each cloud it seem
In my drowsy state
Barely keeping my eyes open
As I grow impatient wanting
To
Inhale you
The scent of you engulfs me
All around me as I drift into
My own little dream state
My world of you
I see you’re face etched on the
Clouds
Your potrait so vivid
Wanting
As your hemline catches my eye
Our love is fresh exciting just as
If
We were back in our youth
With a renewal of our lives
Dedicating our love so fragile
In our own fairytale land
Our dreams
I feel your body as you lie beside
Me
I feel your body touch
The warmth
The love fills me full
What a beautiful revelation
So quaint
Left us
Wanting, waiting ,yearning
To start our love anew
Into our fairytale land our
Dreams is the revelation..
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2008-02-20 00:53:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: As I Drift
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 10:39:48 PM AEST (User
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oh honey, this was so damn beautiful!!
I love the line,
"As I grow impatient wanting
To
Inhale you"
Damn! Now that is poetry! Excellent
wording and flow. So dreamy ..
Beauty in words ~
~Breezy |
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