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Forever, Fathom
Contributed by
GraveTypeBed
on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 11:26:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'll Get lost in this love
I'll get lost in those eyes
Stay with me darling always by my side
Rise up with me we'll be just fine
The sun dawns a new day yet this bond remains
Lost in nostalgic memories
Fates threads pull us away
Hate has fueled this cessation of time
For In faith I have found you
With blurred eyes and aching body
Open arms await the martyr
The dimmest dreams cascade over a broken horizon
For the darkest illumination awaits me
As ravenous hands strip me of my beloved one last time
The Silence is broken and daybreak approaches
A Stray tear rolls down my cheek as my love returns to me
Confined in this love
This will never die
You will always be the conviction
The heroine to my heart
The girl in my dreams, The angel in my eyes
Hearts have never looked so good
Than when they're smashed into pieces
Now ameliorate me my love and take back what's yours
Copyright ©
GraveTypeBed
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2008-02-19 23:26:06]
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Re: Forever, Fathom
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by GraveTypeBed on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 12:39:58 AM AEST
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Re: Forever, Fathom
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 02:05:39 AM AEST
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This was brillant. The flow and the words gave this a great kick. I can relate to your feelings about never letting someone go when they meant so much to you.
Hearts have never looked so good
Than when they're smashed into pieces
These were my favorite lines. Well done.
Take care
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Re: Forever, Fathom
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by brew on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 07:23:14 AM AEST
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WEll that was one way to tell someone, what they had and lost. Very strong write, with words, that told the truth. WIshed all people would learn to tell others, exactly how they feel......not sugar coat it. Again, very good write.
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