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Empty
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 03:55:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Like Think Black Tar
seeping out of my mind
through my ears
my nose
my mouth
every whole that it can find.
Dripping out onto the ground
Every drop echoes as it hits,
shattering into million little pieces
The ground swallows it whole,
asks no questions,
just thirstily gulps every drop I have to give
Emptiness
the imminent ground of all form.
Copyright ©
SilverRain
... [
2008-02-19 15:55:19]
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Re: Empty
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 04:21:30 AM AEST
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Beautiful imagery and great flow. This was a really good poem. Well done.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Empty
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by alibof10 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 06:25:35 AM AEST
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| outstanding again man! awesome poem |
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