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It's not me, it's you.
Contributed by
Ratwick
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Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 07:31:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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This is passion without intentions
To be anything less than perfect.
If that's not good enough for you
Then please tell me what is.
O wait, you can't cos I can't listen
To such whining anymore.
Its only self absorption.
It's not me it's you
And a lack of freedom
And expression that's real.
I have more than you'll ever feel again.
This is ego and unjustly so.
This is not anywhere close to perfect.
No, you're not good enough for you.
So fake. You can't cos I can. Listen,
There's no hiding anymore
Within in your self absorption.
Maybe I'm a hypocrite.
But baby, don't I look damn good?
Maybe I'm so full of *****.
But baby, I will say what you should,
"It's me."
Copyright ©
Ratwick
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2008-02-19 07:31:56]
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Re: It's not me, it's you.
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 08:11:53 AM AEST
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Wow, this is really good.
Smiles,
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Re: It's not me, it's you.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 08:14:44 AM AEST
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Hard hitting with a fast pace. I can feel your anger and emotions tearing through your words. Well done.
Take care
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Re: It's not me, it's you.
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 08:22:57 AM AEST
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Your emotion felt thru your write..
Blessing my friend |
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Re: It's not me, it's you.
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 02:25:03 PM AEST
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i love it. especially as this is generally the situation when someone says its not you, its me..... like hell is it me!
really loved your flow and i love some of you lines..... i also fell in love with your last stanza!
great write thanks for sharing. some times it helps to vent
Gen |
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Re: It's not me, it's you.
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 05:13:45 PM AEST
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| Well Done |
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