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chains of the past
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 06:38:15 AM in AEST
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I dream of blood
it rains of desolation
screaming inside ..
no one comes to my aid to ail the pain
I lay there forsaken
its a new awakening
a breaking down
of my own self
leave all this animosity on the shelf
reaching for it
only when i feel the need
reach for the hatred inside
only when they make me bleed .. again
fall to me
fall from me
ressurect the wounds
each day gets more insane than the last
i'll never escape the chains of the past
vampyress Jenni
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Phantomvampyress
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Re: chains of the past
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 06:58:53 AM AEST
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Brillant. The words just jump of the page and get in your face. Your words and the emotions hold so much power and this is wonderfully written. The title of this poem fits this to a tee and can make this poem so very relateable. Amazing poem.
Take care
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Re: chains of the past
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 08:00:06 AM AEST
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Yeah, what christina said.
Incredible writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: chains of the past
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 08:18:11 AM AEST
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Very powerful write.
The past is definitely a haunting animal.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: chains of the past
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 08:40:40 AM AEST
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Excelllent piece of work..
Blessings my friend in poetry |
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Re: chains of the past
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 05:16:02 PM AEST
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love the way this flows
Excellent..... |
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Re: chains of the past
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 11:15:25 PM AEST
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wow Jenni, it's so nice to see a new post from you! ^_^
You have touched on an inescapable subject .. the past and its hold
on our hearts, (or should I say its grip) It is a very powerful
motivator to be sure. How lovely it would be if we could just choose
the memories we want to retain and let the others fall away, hmm?
In any case, excellent word choices here. They add to
the poem's emotive quality and blending.
~Breezy
(thanks for your very kind words in the forums. :)
That was so sweet of you. ) |
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Re: chains of the past
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 01:51:15 PM AEST
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| An excellent write my friend. |
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Re: chains of the past
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 10:26:35 PM AEST
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ressurect the wounds . . . what a noble line this is, i love the tittle also . . . as always's
jenn, magnificent work you do no matter how long in between your post. . . .
Ben
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Re: chains of the past
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by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 07:21:40 AM AEST
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Powerful and beautiful!
Great work.
Thanks for sharing
~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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