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Puddles
Contributed by
Polka
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Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 04:40:00 AM in AEST
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oops
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I spent all day long squatting in puddles,
Changing my trousers when my arse numbed.
It was the most fun I’ve had since spring,
When I could gorge myself on gooseberries.
“You’ve ruined your two pairs of pants yet again
And it won’t be you who has to scrub them clean.
You’re to stop sitting in puddles, you hear?
It’s something you do only when you’re young.”
O! sweet muse, whisper to me now, certain
Delicacies of sound, fit phrases for a man
Stamping on the muck-puddles of his mind,
Searching for the dirt gathered up beneath.
Copyright ©
Polka
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2008-02-19 04:40:00]
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Re: Puddles
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 08:49:45 AM AEST
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Nice write
God Bless my friend in poetry |
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Re: Puddles
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 25th February 2008 @ 10:42:01 PM AEST
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Wow! im loving your writing, fabulous images here and such honest writing, its like looking at a seen and saying what exactly you see, but with a poetic eye, im not the best at giving comment but i try, and i only comment on poems i really like, and this is exeptional, well done!!!
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