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forgotten steps
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 04:32:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Felt bold—
Corrupted night; moonless night—
Shine stars.
Lowered head—
Another’s shoulder; Another’s breast—
Become one.
Swept floor—
Dust and rain; forgotten steps—
Remember love.
Remembered her—
Folding flowers; perfumed smile—
Stand still.
Stirred coffee—
Closed laughter; opened tears—
Shudder kiss.
Have loved—
Dirty field; dread glances—
Fall silent.
Felt bold—
Remember love; remember me—
Let close.
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iodinelove
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2008-02-17 16:32:36]
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Re: forgotten steps
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by emystar on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 05:43:48 PM AEST
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Well abe you can play around all ya want.
Very creative writer you are.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: forgotten steps
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 05:56:41 PM AEST
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wow a very well expressed poem.. I liked the flow of this one alot
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: forgotten steps
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th February 2008 @ 03:42:23 AM AEST
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wow, there is such a beautiful remembrance in here, but at
the same time, a sadness as well. A sadness within the silence
and the plea to let it close. Wonderful poetry, my friend. There
is an irony to the fact that I find it quite peaceful. Damn fine work!
~Breezy |
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Re: forgotten steps
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by Craze on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 10:14:35 PM AEST
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| Impressive! |
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