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Blue
Contributed by
Notre
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Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 04:07:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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I lost feeling of joy, but I got it back soon at the night.
Blue rules everything.
Mid night, deep sea, and clear sky .
Copyright ©
Notre
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2008-02-17 16:07:36]
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Re: Blue
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by iodinelove on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 04:42:25 PM AEST
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typically a haiku is 5 syl 7 syl 5syl
if i recall the original form (of haiku) were 12 10 12 or 12 10 11 or something...i can't remember...
anyway...these days people use 5 7 5
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Re: Blue
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by iodinelove on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 04:42:42 PM AEST
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typically a haiku is 5 syl 7 syl 5syl
if i recall the original form (of haiku) were 12 10 12 or 12 10 11 or something...i can't remember...
anyway...these days people use 5 7 5
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Re: Blue
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 04:47:36 PM AEST
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| good write but that guys right a haiku is generally written in 5 7 5 format |
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Re: Blue
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 05:49:48 PM AEST
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same i was always taught it was 575
even so it was still good. this is very apt for my feelings right now |
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Re: Blue
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th February 2008 @ 03:53:56 AM AEST
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well .. there's no need for my explanation of Haiku .. lol
but the essence of this was truly beautiful. The second and third lines
are perfect .. all you need to do is fix the syllables in the first line and
you will have a damn fine Haiku!
Keep posting
~Breezy |
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Re: Blue
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 10:45:06 AM AEST
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| I agree with everyone but the content is good though |
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