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not wasting anytime
Contributed by
SamJoelle
on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 05:15:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i can see you standing there now
your going to try & not smile
& im going to try and not run to you
we play ourselves off as being cool
when we both know that
you want to smile so big, it lights a distant planet
& that i want to run my way to you, not wasting anytime
I hold you're necklace around my neck in my hands
every day gone, is one day closer to you
i will replace the position of the necklace with you're hands
for a short time
In a way, i dont want the days to go by fast
I want to embrace not having you now
so when i do
We will make stars crash into one another with our brilliance
The sun will shine on us
for that short time
it's only a taste, a tiny part of what we'll forever have
oh, when i see you
we're going to make stars crash
Not wasting anytime
Copyright ©
SamJoelle
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2008-02-17 05:15:02]
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Re: not wasting anytime
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by emystar on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 06:28:55 PM AEST
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This is simply beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: not wasting anytime
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th February 2008 @ 04:23:42 AM AEST
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"We will make stars crash into one another with our brilliance"
Friend, that is one of the most exquisite and beautifully poetic lines
I've read in a very long time. Damn! I love how this started as
a moment of shyness and moved into the boldness of that line! SHOOT!
Oh, YES! This is what poetry is .. it is the making of emotions in
the reader E X P L O D E ! ! There is a soft passion in this just
waiting to burst at the seems! Beautiful work, poet. Just beautiful!
*sigh*
~Breezy |
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