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Me And My Shadow
Contributed by
honey56
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Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 02:17:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Just me and my shadow
Walking around
In the late evening sunset
Trying to see if there is
Anything we can get into
Before moon abide
Walking around this
Grove of magnolia’s
Me and my shadow
enjoying fragrances
Smell delightful
Blooms blossom out
So heavenly
Me and mt shadow and a
Yellow butterfly
Make three
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honey56
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2008-02-17 02:17:49]
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Re: Me And My Shadow
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by JohnYamrus on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 02:39:51 AM AEST
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i wasn't really into this until the end. excellent finish.
john |
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Re: Me And My Shadow
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by Harmony on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 06:22:44 AM AEST
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| a shadow sniffing and a yellow butterfly! :) i like it honey! :) |
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Re: Me And My Shadow
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 09:32:33 AM AEST
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oh honey, now you have me longing for the beauty and serenity
of spring. I am stuck here in a cold winter wonderland. How I
would LOVE to enjoy the sun and a wander through the magnolia's.
I miss the butterflies too ... all in all a beautiful rendering of a most
peaceful and lovely moment. :)
~Breezy |
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