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Cry
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Anonymously_Invisible
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Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 05:07:54 PM in AEST
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I cry at night, when no one can hear me
I cry in the dark, because no one's there
I cry in the rain, where no one can see me
I cry right now, because life's never fair
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Re: Cry
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 06:20:11 PM AEST
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ive cried all those times as well... but it never makes you feel better. i found from personal experience using someones shoulder makes those times easier. you just need to let go sometimes..
the poem... i like how you repete the i cry part. gives the poem a nice flow, even though it is only 4 lines. sometimes the short ones are the best ones.... well thats what i was always told about my height.. but i find it can be true with poetry to.
thanks for sharing
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Re: Cry
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by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 12:01:41 AM AEST
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| I like this, it's honest and in your face, so to speak; you don't talk in riddles, and the beauty of this poem lies in its simplicity, thanks, tuesd xxx |
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Re: Cry
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by JohnYamrus on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 01:27:41 AM AEST
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| well done! |
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Re: Cry
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 06:01:08 PM AEST
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this is a powerful sad little write.. packs a powerful expression in it.. but things aren't always bad.. remember there is always hope
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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