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Night Before My Flight
Contributed by
d1x0n
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Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 03:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sad to say I’m only in town for the night,
So i wanna spend time with you before my flight.
It’s just us two
So what do you wanna do
Maybe we can go skating
Or to the movies
Is that okay with you?
Or how bout a long walk
And maybe we can talk about our life and future
You make a perfect wife and teacher
I know its cold out tonight
But trust me you won’t get another frostbite
Cause I’m here to protect you from the cold winter night.
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d1x0n
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2008-02-16 15:18:00]
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Re: Night Before My Flight
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 06:25:37 PM AEST
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reminds me of my last night in england before my flight to the US to live here.
i spent it with the guy i love. it was probably one of the most horrible but wonderful nights i spent with him.
i love your use of imagery in this poem. i like its shortness also.
thanks for sharing.
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Re: Night Before My Flight
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by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 12:03:46 AM AEST
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| or maybe you should just stay in and make your own entertainment! i enjoyed this read, it's so hard to leave the people you love, even for a little while, but often, it has to be done, tuesd xxx |
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