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Reality check

Contributed by happybunnyfan on Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 03:21:09 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Got to go
Got to get escape
Got to learn pretty quick
Brick walls don't break.

Can't stand what you're becoming
Past the point of emotional numbing
No longer in the safe zone
Low enough to sell ***** you own
Got to support this black out
Swimmin at full speed in self-doubt

No.
No.

Busted Knuckles, no sleep, and bottle fights
Yeah, that's how you spend our nights
Into every bottle you wish to dive
It's come to this, to make you feel alive
Life gets crazy, when you know, this battle you won't beat
You keep a stash of bail money hidden in the front seat
As it slowly takes a hold
All you have left is what you've been told

You got to go
You got to get escape
You learn pretty quick
Brick walls don't break.

On the way to rock bottom, feet barley touching ground
Curled up in a corner rarely making a sound
There's a fire in your veins as you try to quit
Wherever you go, you're pretty much lit
It's this that's making you look over your shoulder
It's the addiction taking over.

Help me.
Help me.

I got to go
I got to get escape
I got to learn pretty quick
Brick walls don't break.

Copyright © happybunnyfan ... [ 2008-02-15 15:21:09]
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Re: Reality check (User Rating: 1 )
by akakin on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 04:27:13 PM AEST
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nice...
lovin the rhyme.

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