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The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine)
Contributed by
Willofree
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Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 11:55:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Come join with me internally,
so harmonious do we intertwine.
In this, our floral design;
a favorite bouquet of yours and mine.
So we may exist side by side,
and insist we abide where love resides.
My favorite flower is in bloom,
accompanied by your blossom too.
How blessed does our appearance relate,
to a combination of love within our inner state.
In harmony our flowers co-exist.
Together we can enjoy peace and bliss.
The pristine beauty of the rose,
coupled with the vivacious Daisy:
one with its thorns to protect the flower,
the other swaying in the breeze, as if singing in a choir.
The social bouquet of the Daisies:
gorgeous upon the meadow,
a gregarious bunch are we,
often grow wild for everyone to see.
The rose, a symbol of love in my heart,
you and I together until death do us part.
However, no matter how bound together we are
the Daisies represent our separate gregarious social part.
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Willofree
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Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine)
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by emystar on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 12:22:01 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
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emy |
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Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine)
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by emystar on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 12:22:11 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine)
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by emystar on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 12:22:15 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine)
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 12:36:43 PM AEST
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This piece was incredibly beautiful and full of imagery that could touch even the most broken of hearts.
How blessed does our appearance relate,
to a combination of love within our inner state.
In harmony our flowers co-exist.
Together we can enjoy peace and bliss.
Oh how I loved this.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine)
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 08:04:31 PM AEST
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The rose, a symbol of love in my heart,
you and I together until death do us part.
However, no matter how bound together we are
the Daisies represent our separate gregarious social part.
made the whole poem to me. it basically sumed up everything that love is to me. i loved the rest of the poem but it was that last stanza |
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Re: The Daisy and the Rose (A Valentine)
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by Whargies on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 06:08:59 AM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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