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The Trail
Contributed by
moses
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Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 11:14:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Dragging my feet along this unbeaten trail,
To these passing trees I’d gladly spill my soul.
The tick of my watch chills my heart,
And I focus on my shoes as I walk.
I forgetfully peer beyond the peaceful face of the forest,
Where saplings grow on top of the rotting debris,
Deep orange feathers fall off of a flash of flying forms,
And a stray limping cub’s eyes burn through the shadows.
Every cell of the land is screaming,
Too loudly, for I have grown deaf.
I shudder as I wander aimlessly,
Keeping my eyes fixed on the rugged earth at my feet.
Copyright ©
moses
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2008-02-15 11:14:38]
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Re: The Trail
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by Ruby2sdy on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 02:23:48 PM AEST
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I like how visual this poem is, Im there just from reading your words! It's simple, but beautiful in it's own way,
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Re: The Trail
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by funnyface09 on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 05:04:10 PM AEST
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i felt i was being transported to one of the woods in one of Harry Potter's books..
great description...keep it up..
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Re: The Trail
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by themonk on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 01:22:42 PM AEST
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greetings my good friend, i must say you are growing into a true poet!
I think you have finally got the idea of leaving the reader a piece of their own mind, a piece that they can finish and take home with them. You are getting it.
bravo!
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