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Tourment's Mind
Contributed by
Dawn17
on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 09:34:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The poet hides away.
All her thoughts and pain
Throughout night and day.
Awoken by the rain
Full of her shame.
She’s only afraid
To let them see.
The price must be paid.
Everything she must be.
They all are the same.
Loved and hated, she waits
Until she can end it all.
Everything she hates.
She will have to fall.
They are to blame.
In whitened darkness
She stumbles blind.
Ignorance is bliss.
It’s all in her mind
Every single little game.
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Dawn17
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2008-02-15 09:34:26]
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Re: Tourment's Mind
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th February 2008 @ 12:44:51 AM AEST
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Flowed wonderfully.
I can relate.
Powerful and well written.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Tourment's Mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 08:39:27 AM AEST
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| This sounds like me lol! Anyway, this is an excellent poem |
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